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Gate Troll |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 9:55 am |
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Joined: 15 Aug 2006
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Location: Udun Vale, Home of the one and only... Gate Troll!
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I was browsing through Age’s End Spoilers the other day and I saw
some Tentacles. Great! I thought finally some decent tentacles.
Well it turned they were as sucky as the Fellowship tentacles so I decided
to come out of CC retirement and do a few tentacles. Reviews, criticsim
and complaints welcome.
Hidden Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Damage +1. Tentacle.
This Tentacle is Strength +1
for each Companion and Tentacle
you spot.
Slimy Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 5
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Damage+1 Tentacle
Regroup:Shuffle X cards into
your drawdeck where X is the number
of conditions you can spot.
Gripping Strength
Condition
Strength +2
Shadow: Plays on a Tentacle, that Tentacle is
Fierce.
Swiftness
Condition
Vitality +1
Shadow: Plays on a Tentacle. If you can spot
3 Tentacles while playing this card its twilight
cost is .
Grasping Strength
Condition
Strength +3
When you play this card discard a card from
hand or discard 3 cards from hand to play
this card for free.
•Giant Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Lurker. Damage +1. Fierce. Tentacle.
Shadow: Spot X Conditions. Add [X].
Lurking Tentacle
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Lurker. While Skirmishing a companion
which has a strength above 8 this
tentacle is Strength +4.
-GT |
Last edited by Gate Troll on Fri Jun 22, 2007 9:42 pm; edited 6 times in total"Wars may be fought with weapons, but they are won by men. It is the spirit of the men who follow and of the man who leads that gains that victory."-George S. Patton. |
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lem0nhead |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 10:01 am |
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Posts: 2981
Location: Blood Island
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Gate Troll wrote: I was browsing through Age’s End Spoilers the other day and I saw
some Tentacles. Great! I thought finally some decent tentacles.
Well it turned they were as sucky as the Fellowship tentacles so I decided
to come out of CC retirement and do a few tentacles. Reviews, criticsim
and complaints welcome.
Hidden Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Damage +1. Tentacle.
This Tentacle is Strength +1
for each Companion and Tentacle
you spot.
Could get out of hand. But the 6 cost should cover it. Cool.
Slimy Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 5
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Damage+1 Tentacle
Regroup:Shuffle X cards into
your drawdeck where X is the number
of conditions you can spot.
Make it shuffle X minions for each minion you spot that would be cooler. Or leave it as it is and make a tentacle that does what i said
Gripping Strength
Condition
Strength +2
Shadow: Plays on a Tentacle, that Tentacle is
Fierce.
Cool. Make it cost 1 though as 2 makes it lame.
Swiftness
Condition
Vitality +1
Shadow: Plays on a Tentacle. If you can spot
3 Tentacles while playing this card its twilight
cost is .
Ok fair enough.
Grasping Strength
Strength +3
When you play this card discard a card from
hand or discard 3 cards to play this card for
free.
Ok but what do you mean by discard 3 moria cards, you mean from play?
•Main Tentacle
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Lurker. Damage+1. Fierce. Tentacle.
Spot X Conditions. Add [X].
The adding x bit is OP even though it costs 7.
Lurking Tentacle
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Lurker. While at a marsh this
Tentacle is Strength +4.
Hmm id make the condition for +4 to be met something other than a marsh as it should be at a marsh anyway.
-GT |
Ban shampoo, demand real poo.
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Gate Troll |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 10:41 am |
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Edited.
Long Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 8
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Shuffle X minions into
your drawdeck and where X is the number of
minions you can spot. |
Last edited by Gate Troll on Thu Jun 21, 2007 4:44 pm; edited 1 time in total"Wars may be fought with weapons, but they are won by men. It is the spirit of the men who follow and of the man who leads that gains that victory."-George S. Patton. |
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lem0nhead |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 10:53 am |
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Joined: 02 Apr 2007
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Location: Blood Island
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Gate Troll wrote:
Grasping Strength
Strength +3
When you play this card discard a card from
hand or discard 3 cards from hand to play
this card for free.
Not sure what this means. You have the choice between discarding 3 moria cards or 1 for the same effect? |
Ban shampoo, demand real poo.
My Trade List and CC References
"Smart guy, especially considering his head is filled with lemon juice and seeds. That boy’s juicy brain is FULL of good stuff" ~ DainIronfoot
"No fair! And all I got was an oily unconscious steward!" ~ Pippin.
"Okay, stop me if you've heard this one. An elf, a man, and a dwarf walk into the Riddermark..." ~ Eomer |
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Gate Troll |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 11:03 am |
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You can discard 1 card from hand and pay , or
discard 3 from hand and and not pay any twilight. |
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:28 pm |
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Joined: 12 Jan 2007
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Location: Beltsville, MD, USA
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Gate Troll wrote: Hidden Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Damage +1. Tentacle.
This Tentacle is Strength +1
for each Companion and Tentacle
you spot.
"Companion" should be lower-case, but pretty neat otherwise.
Gate Troll wrote: Slimy Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 5
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Damage+1 Tentacle
Regroup:Shuffle X cards into
your drawdeck where X is the number
of conditions you can spot.
Interesting.
Gate Troll wrote: Gripping Strength
Condition
Strength +2
Shadow: Plays on a Tentacle, that Tentacle is
Fierce.
Nifty.
Gate Troll wrote: Swiftness
Condition
Vitality +1
Shadow: Plays on a Tentacle. If you can spot
3 Tentacles while playing this card its twilight
cost is .
Awesome.
Gate Troll wrote: Grasping Strength
Strength +3
When you play this card discard a card from
hand or discard 3 cards from hand to play
this card for free.
I think everything from "or discard" to "for free" should be in ()s, for clarity.
Gate Troll wrote: •Main Tentacle
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Lurker. Damage +1. Fierce. Tentacle.
Spot X Conditions. Add [X].
Kind of a weird name. You also need either a phase for the text, or make it work when you play the minion (which is what I’d recommend). I think it should also have a limit of adding , or raise the cost of the tentacle.
Gate Troll wrote: Lurking Tentacle
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Lurker. While Skirmishing a companion
which has a strength above 8 this
tentacle is Strength +4.
"...a companion with at least 8 strength...", I think, is better.
Gate Troll wrote: Long Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 8
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Shuffle X minions into
your drawdeck and where X is the number of
minions you can spot.
Make sure to bold lurker. Again, the ability either needs a phase or needs to trigger when you play this minion. Also, the way it’s worded, it forces you to take ALL minions into hand. Perhaps "When you play this minion, shuffle any number of minions from play into your draw deck." |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 1:03 pm |
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Joined: 23 Mar 2006
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Location: somwhere, over the rainbow way up high. There's a land that I heard of once in a lullaby.
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Gate Troll wrote: I was browsing through Age’s End Spoilers the other day and I saw
some Tentacles. Great! I thought finally some decent tentacles.
Well it turned they were as sucky as the Fellowship tentacles so I decided
to come out of CC retirement and do a few tentacles. Reviews, criticsim
and complaints welcome.
whats a criticsim?
Hidden Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Damage +1. Tentacle.
This Tentacle is Strength +1 for each Companion and Tentacle
you spot.
cut cost to 4-5
Slimy Tentacle
Minion • Tentacle
Strength: 5
Vitality: 2
Site:4
Lurker. Damage+1 Tentacle
Regroup:Shuffle X cards into your drawdeck where X is the number
of conditions you can spot.
regroup should be bolded. where are you shuffling the cards from?
Gripping Strength
Condition
Strength +2
Shadow: Plays on a Tentacle, that Tentacle is
Fierce.
cool.
Swiftness
Condition
Vitality +1
Shadow: Plays on a Tentacle. If you can spot
3 Tentacles while playing this card its twilight
cost is .
should be worded 3 tentacles this card is twilight cost -1.
Grasping Strength
Strength +3
When you play this card discard a card from
hand or discard 3 cards from hand to play
this card for free.
make it discard a moria card from play or 3 cards from hand
•Main Tentacle
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Lurker. Damage +1. Fierce. Tentacle.
Spot X Conditions. Add [X].
change title to large tentacle. make it worded as when you play this minion spot X moria conditions to add X
Lurking Tentacle
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Lurker. While Skirmishing a companion
which has a strength above 8 this
tentacle is Strength +4.
cool!
oh I have one major problem with these. None of them are minions. |
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Gate Troll |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 4:44 pm |
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What do you mean? |
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Thranduil |
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 5:12 pm |
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Gate Troll wrote: What do you mean?
You’ve missed out the ’Minion • Tentacle’ bit for the last couple!
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 1:18 pm |
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Thranduil wrote: Gate Troll wrote: What do you mean?
You’ve missed out the ’Minion • Tentacle’ bit for the last couple!
Thranduil
my bad I though it was all of them. I wasn’t paying attention it is just the last 2 and grasping strength isn’t anything either |
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(mm)"SoP: you will always be the Official CC Spammer in my heart"
"DáinIronfoot"
Spammers really are amazing creatures. You can learn all there is to know about their ways in a month. And yet, after a hundred years, they can still surprise you. |
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