You have a precious few cards that add burdens, then cards that need to remove burdens to function, than cards that care about large numbers of burdens. You have no real gameplan. You basically just combined cards that had the unloaded "twilight" keyword in them, maybe for the lolz?
For fun ya, I was bored and had nothing to do. Nothing of mine actually has to remove burdens though. From the one game I played with it trying to figure out a good way to use it the outcome was that the ringbearer was taking a crap load of wounds from Enquea and the witch-king and if I could tweak it a bit, drop the
wisp of pale sheen and add some
RBU I could probably turn it into one of those decks