I think that your article is somewhat interesting but really does not explain very well why I should use this deck. Your intro doesn’t really "grab" the reader and your conclusion is not very grat ...
I really liked the length of your article but I felt that the strategy portion was not so great. I still think that it would be very hard to beat the Mauhur with this deck. You do show how to beat it...
I felt that both your conclusion and ending were sorta weak. ALSO it may have been good to mention other types of decks that his deck would work against.
Personally I don’t think swarm is as ...