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TheHobbit13 |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:29 pm |
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macheteman |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:45 pm |
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*Bard is not Lost!
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bearer must be Bard. he is defender +1.
Response:If Bard is about to take a wound that would kill him. discard this condition to prevent that wound.
"...A tall figure stepped from the shadows. he was drenched with water, his black hair hung wet over his face and shoulders, a fierce light was in his eyes. ’Bard is not lost he cried’" |
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TheHobbit13 |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:51 pm |
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I like it  |
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AnxiousChieftain |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:52 pm |
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macheteman wrote:  *Bard is not Lost!
Condition
bearer must be Bard. he is defender +1.
If Bard is about to take a wound that would kill him. discard this condition to prevent that wound.
"...A tall figure stepped from the shadows. he was drenched with water, his black hair hung wet over his face and shoulders, a fierce light was in his eyes. ’Bard is not lost he cried’"
Nice, although you need to say "Reponse:". |
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macheteman |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:59 pm |
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thanks i fixed the card. what do you think of the other cards? |
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AnxiousChieftain |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 9:07 pm |
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Quote:  *Bard, Savior of the Long Lake
Companion - Man
Strength: 7
Vitality: 3
Resistance: 7
While you can spot more companions than minions, the fellowship archery total is +X, where X is the number of companions minus the number of minions.
"Their captain was bard, grim-voiced and grim-faced..."
Nice.
Quote:  *The Black Arrow
Possession - Ranged Weapon
Vitality: +1
Bearer must be Bard, Brand, or Girion.
Bearer is damage+1.
Skirmish: If bearer is Bard, discard this possession tp wound a minion he is skirmishing.
"’Arrow!’ said the bowman. ’Black arrow! I have saved you to the last.’"
I don’t like the vitality bonus - it doesn’t seem like the type of stat bonus that an arrow would give.
Other than that, it’s cool, although there’s a word misspelled (tp instead of to).
Quote:  *Old Thrush, Dragon’s Bane
Follower
Strength: +1
Aid-add a burden
each time you transfer this to a companion, except Bard, exert bearer.
Shadow events and shadow skirmish abilities may not be used during skirmishes involving bearer.
"’The thrushes are good and friendly-this is a very old bird indeed...they were a long-lived and magical race...’"
Ouch. That ability is very very powerful. I think that it should exert twice if it isn’t Bard, and maybe even have the aid cost be 2 burdens.
Quote:   *Smaug, Lair to the Lonely Mountain [Dragon]
Minion - Dragon
Strength: 13
Vitality: 5
Site Number: 2
While you can spot Smaug, the twilight cost of each fire card is -1.
Maneuver: exert Smaug twice to take a fire event, condition, or possession into hand from your discard pile.
"Beneath him, under all his limbs and his huge coiled tail...lay countless piles of precious things..."
Maybe a bit underpowered. His cost could be lowered to 8.
Quote:  Back swirled the Dragon [Dragon]
Event
Response: If a skirmish involving a Dragon is about to end, make that Dragon fierce until the regroup phase.
"Fire leaped from thatched roofs and wooden beam-ends as he hurtled down and past and round again..."
Good.
Quote:  Fires of Smaug [Dragon]
Condition
FireTo play spot a dragon. Plays to your support area.
Archery: exert a dragon to transfer this condition from your support area to a companion(limit 1 per bearer). each time bearer exerts because of a free-peoples card, you may exert a companion.
Awesome!
Quote:  *The Master, Selfish Leader [Dragon]
Minion - Man
Strength: 3
Vitality: 2
Site Number: 2
Dragons do not take archery wounds.
Assignment: exert The Master to assign him to a skirmish.
I don’t like the thought of him being a minion - he was more of just a selfish companion.
Quote:  Withered Heath [Site]
Dragons do not take wounds (except during shirmishes).
’Do not’ should be ’cannot’, and skirmishes is misspelled. |
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macheteman |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 9:23 pm |
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thanks.
i fixed the spelling, and tweaked Smaug and the thrush a bit.
and removed the master. |
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TheHobbit13 |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 9:26 pm |
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macheteman |
Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 11:19 pm |
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*Girion, Sire to Bard
Companion - Man
Strength: 6
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 6
Muster.While you can spot Girion, Bard, and Brand, they are all strength +2.
"’Girion was lord of Dale...’" |
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corvus |
Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 3:21 am |
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Man, i looooooove what u r doing! gp for ya! |
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Far, Far beyond the island we dwelt in shapes of twilight
Through draught and weary days
Through grief and endless pain |
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