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| CarpeGuitarrem | 
 Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 9:56 pm | 
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| In a way, the very reason to write an article is to "get roasted by other people". I view it as a challenge, and a way to improve my skill at writing and strategizing. Often, people come up with great points to help me improve my game, and hopefully I can help them in return. | 
 
| "ok, change of plans. the Cobracards christmas party is coming to my house, and we’re gunna teach FM how to hunt." (mm) | 
 
 
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| TheShyzle | 
 Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 10:00 pm | 
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| Well said CG but going on and posting a half a sentence and voting someone a 2 is a load of doo doo..after you put an hour into your article to have someone say some ignorant coment ant then vote doesn’t make me want to keep writing articles. I am reading yours right now. I won’t give you a 2 even if it did suck. | 
 
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| CarpeGuitarrem | 
 Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 10:07 pm | 
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Hey, thanks. I do agree that giving out low ratings with barely a sentence is a poor practice. I’ve had some bad experience with low ratings that I didn’t think I deserved, but that’s just my thoughts on the matter.
 
 
Usually, I try to give a long recommendation, plus some extra time for the article writer to fix their article. But that’s just personal preference. 
 
 
Anyway...back on track here...
 
 
I’d like to see a little more flow to this article-it could be a whole lot stronger. Your minion side shouldn’t even get mentioned, because that’s not what this article is about. | 
 
| "ok, change of plans. the Cobracards christmas party is coming to my house, and we’re gunna teach FM how to hunt." (mm) | 
 
 
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| Aragorn_Ellessar | 
 Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:20 pm | 
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| Good idea, and better than your other ones, at least it appeared to me. | 
 
One Ring to rule them all
 
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| fingolfin | 
 Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:44 pm | 
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That’s what I thought too, but as the one before had two 5s and this one has 4 3s...but the first one I put in some effort and did fair, the next one I put in more effort and did worse for rating, and this one I put in 2-3 hours and got the worst, but that’s how it is sometimes. And I guess I just don’t have a good stratagy article in me somewhere. BTW CG I’ve never taken a class on how to write "Strong" articles, so If I even write another stratagy article(Which will be a while if ever) I will try to put in what I have learned.
 
 
So thanks E_L CG and A_E your input will be added to my other stratagy article experiences. | 
 
Soldier: why'd you do that captain?
 
 
John Wayne: Because I hate your guts!!
 
 
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| PorterTroll | 
 Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 8:21 pm | 
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TheShyzle wrote: . What do I know I am just a "trainee" anyways...  
 
 
haha    that is what i found so funny about this site when i first arrived, the best person at LOTR can be a "trainee" just because they’re not a spammer, and a newbie can be an "expert" simply because they spam! eh, what are ya gunna do?    | 
 
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| TheShyzle | 
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| fingolfin | 
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Soldier: why'd you do that captain?
 
 
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| maxidoodle | 
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| fingolfin | 
 Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 7:11 pm | 
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