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legoles3333 |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:01 am |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote: DáinIronfoot wrote: Anonymous Prodigy wrote: Thanks for the reviews, CG and Dain.  I raised the cost of ’Horses Would Not Go’ to  . 
Better, but I think it should be limited to 1 per bearer, too.
Done. A well-earned  to CG, and one to Dain as soon as I can manage it!
 Archer Troop of Harad
Minion • Man
Strength: 7
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Archer.
While you can spot another  minion, the minion archery total is +1.
U179
if were adding to the howdah, play this card
 Mumakil Bellowing
Event • Maneuver
Spot 2  mounts to make the Free Peoples discard his or her mount or add  .
U180
the wording should be "Discard
one of his/her mounts or add
 • Haradrim Lieutenant
Minion • Man
Strength: 9
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Hunter 1.
To play, spot a  Man.
Each time Haradrim Lieutenant wins a skirmish, you may reinforce a  token or add  .
ok instant plash into a howdah deck  |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 6:03 am |
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Edited. Thanks for the review, l333! as soon as I can manage it, and the next review of ’Haradrim Lieutenant’ gets a . |
I had to put something here. |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 7:41 am |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote:
 Archer Troop of Harad
Minion • Man
Strength: 7
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Archer.
While you can spot another  minion, the minion archery total is +1.
U179
nice
 Mumakil Bellowing
Event • Maneuver
Spot 2  mounts to make the Free Peoples player discard a Free Peoples mount or add  .
U180
the title seems grammatically incorrect for what I think you are trying to convey. make it cost 0
 • Haradrim Lieutenant
Minion • Man
Strength: 9
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Hunter 1.
To play, spot a  Man.
Each time Haradrim Lieutenant wins a skirmish, you may reinforce a  token or add  .
really with that ability I would seriously consider raising his cost to 4.
GP please  |
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AnxiousChieftain |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:16 am |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Archer Troop of Harad
Minion • Man
Strength: 7
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Archer.
While you can spot another  minion, the minion archery total is +1.
U179
Nice... but why a site number of 5?
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Charge of the Mumakil
Event • Maneuver
Spot 2  mounts to make the Free Peoples player discard a Free Peoples mount or add  .
C180
Only needing to spot one mount would make it better.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  • Haradrim Lieutenant
Minion • Man
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Hunter 1.
To play, spot a  Man.
Each time Haradrim Lieutenant wins a skirmish, you may reinforce a  token or add  .
R181
Awesome card (besides the site number).
- AC |
MODS RULE. - lem0nhead |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:28 am |
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I tweaked the cards a bit more. as soon as I can manage it!
• Regiment of Harad
Minion • Man
Strength: 11
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
To play, spot a Man.
Assignment: Exert this minion twice to assign it to a companion. The Free Peoples player may add to prevent this.
U182
Haradrim Gauntlets
Possession • Armor
Strength +1
Bearer must be a Man. Bearer gains hunter 1.
Skirmish: If the Free Peoples player plays an event in a skirmish involving bearer, discard this possession to cancel all effects of that event.
C183
Charging Mumakil
Possession • Mount
Strength +4
Bearer must be a Man.
Each time bearer wins a skirmish, you may discard a Free Peoples mount or exert a companion.
C184
I have one last card to make for the culture, but since cards are not my forte, I have run out of ideas. Suggest something for the final rare, and a to whichever card title I choose!  |
Last edited by Anonymous Prodigy on Sat Apr 14, 2007 12:53 pm; edited 3 times in totalI had to put something here. |
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AnxiousChieftain |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:35 am |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  • Regiment of Harad
Minion • Man
Strength: 11
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
To play, spot a  Man.
Assignment: Exert this minion twice to assign it to an unbound companion. The Free Peoples player may add  to prevent this.
U182
I would make it add . just doesn’t seem good enough.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Haradrim Gauntlets
Possession • Armor
Bearer must be a  Man.
Skirmish: If the Free Peoples player plays an event in a skirmish involving bearer, discard this possession to make the Free Peoples player pay that event’s twilight cost again.
C183
Seems just too weak. Maybe it could add 1 to strength as well.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Charging Mumakil
Possession • Mount
Strength +4
Bearer must be a  Man.
Each time bearer wins a skirmish wins a skirmish, you may discard a Free Peoples mount or exert a companion.
C184
Awesome.
For the last card title:
Marching to War
Legions from the South (event or condition) |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:39 am |
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I gave ’Haradrim Gauntlets’ strength +1 and hunter 1. Cool card titles; for the review!  |
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 9:11 am |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  • Regiment of Harad
Minion • Man
Strength: 11
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
To play, spot a  Man.
Assignment: Exert this minion twice to assign it to an unbound companion. The Free Peoples player may add  to prevent this.
U182
Neat.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Haradrim Gauntlets
Possession • Armor
Strength +1
Bearer must be a  Man. Bearer gains hunter 1.
Skirmish: If the Free Peoples player plays an event in a skirmish involving bearer, discard this possession to make the Free Peoples player pay that event’s twilight cost again.
C183
As an alternative, you could say "If the Free Peoples player plays an event in a skirmish involving bearer, discard this possession to cancel all effects of that event and make that player take it back into hand." Kinda wordy, but this gives the FP player the option of giving up on that event entirely (which might be a good thing for you) OR doing exactly what the ability does now.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Charging Mumakil
Possession • Mount
Strength +4
Bearer must be a  Man.
Each time bearer wins a skirmish wins a skirmish, you may discard a Free Peoples mount or exert a companion.
C184
You said "wins a skirmish" twice. Otherwise really neat.
for a good batch. Not sure to what to reommend for the last card; Men are one of my weak points. I like AC’s ideas, though.  |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:04 am |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote: I tweaked the cards a bit more.  as soon as I can manage it!
 • Regiment of Harad
Minion • Man
Strength: 11
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
To play, spot a  Man.
Assignment: Exert this minion twice to assign it to an unbound companion. The Free Peoples player may add  to prevent this.
U182
make it to a companion period like those older haradrim
 Haradrim Gauntlets
Possession • Armor
Strength +1
Bearer must be a  Man. Bearer gains hunter 1.
Skirmish: If the Free Peoples player plays an event in a skirmish involving bearer, discard this possession to cancel all effects of that event and make that player take it back into hand.
C183
just cancel all affects no take back into hand
 Charging Mumakil
Possession • Mount
Strength +4
Bearer must be a  Man.
Each time bearer wins a skirmish, you may discard a Free Peoples mount or exert a companion.
C184
nice |
Sop's haves/ top wants
(mm)"SoP: you will always be the Official CC Spammer in my heart"
"DáinIronfoot"
Spammers really are amazing creatures. You can learn all there is to know about their ways in a month. And yet, after a hundred years, they can still surprise you.  |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 12:59 pm |
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Thanks for the reviews, guys! Cards edited as suggested. Now, for the final card, I choose AC’s suggestion, ’Legions from the South’. to AC, and thanks!
Legions from the South
Event • Shadow
Spot X minions to play a minion from your draw deck or discard pile. That minion’s twilight cost is -X.
R185 |
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