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Mouth of Saruman |
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:48 pm |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote: Thanks for reviewing!
De nada.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  • Wisdom of Curunir
Condition • Support Area
To play, spot Curunir and discard a card from hand.
Each time Curunir loses a skirmish, add a  token here.
Maneuver: Remove 2  tokens from here to play the fellowship’s next site (replacing an opponent’s site if necessary). Exert a  companion or discard this condition.
U36
Nice. If you want a flavor text, I’d go with: "’...and Gandalf the Grey rides to Isengard, seeking my counsel.’"
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Name Him Not!
Event • Fellowship or Regroup
Discard Gandalf to remove all twilight tokens from the twilight pool.
R37
Harsh but fair. Well done. Don’t forget to italicize the ’or.’
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Counsel I Gave
Event • Maneuver
Spot Gandalf and discard a  card from hand to heal an  companion.
U38
I would lower the cost by 1 as compared to Master of Healing. Good cards! |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:57 pm |
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I edited the cards as you suggested, with the exception of adding the flavor text; after the set is completed, I may go back add flavor text, but probably not. Thanks for reviewing!  |
I had to put something here. |
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CarpeGuitarrem |
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:04 pm |
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Very sweet changes, AP! I like the cards now, as they are. |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:14 pm |
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Thanks, CG!  |
I had to put something here. |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 3:43 pm |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote:
 • Wisdom of Curunir
Condition • Support Area
To play, spot Curunir and discard a card from hand.
Each time Curunir loses a skirmish, add a  token here.
Maneuver: Remove 2  tokens from here to play the fellowship’s next site (replacing an opponent’s site if necessary). Exert a  companion or discard this condition.
U36
wait did you make a free peoples curunir? I just saw saruman. works for me you might need to say Then either exert a...
 Counsel I Gave
Event • Maneuver
Spot Gandalf and discard a  card from hand to heal an  companion.
U38
cut cost to 0 IMO |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 4:18 pm |
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I edited the text of ’Wisdom of Curunir’ to "Then either exert a companion or....." Thanks for the reviews; here is the next batch of .
• Friend At Need
Condition • Support Area
To play, spot Gandalf and exert a Ring-bound companion.
Each time you play a follower, you may remove a burden.
C39
How Do You Know This?
Event • Skirmish
Exert Gandalf to make a minion he is skirmishing lose all strength bonuses from weapons.
C40
• Glamdring, Blade of Gondolin
Possession • Hand Weapon
Strength +2.
Bearer must be Gandalf.
He gains hunter 1.
Maneuver: Discard this possession to heal a companion for each minion you can spot.
R41
First Light On The Fifth Day
Event • Maneuver
Exert 2 companions (except companions) to make Gandalf strength +4 and defender +1 until the regroup phase.
U42
Go Back To The Shadow!
Event • Skirmish
Exert Gandalf twice to make him strength +5 and damage +1; if he loses that skirmish, place him in the dead pile.
R43 |
Last edited by Anonymous Prodigy on Fri Feb 23, 2007 9:33 pm; edited 2 times in totalI had to put something here. |
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 4:36 pm |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  • Friend At Need
Condition • Support Area
To play, spot Gandalf and exert a Ring-bound companion.
Each time you play a  follower, you may remove a burden.
U39
A tad bit overpowered, I think. Make it either cost or exert Gandalf as well.
This certainly helps with a Gandalf RB.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  How Do You Know This?
Event • Skirmish
Exert Gandalf to make a minion he is skirmishing lose all strength bonuses from weapons.
C40
Seems balanced.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  • Glamdring, Blade of Gondolin
Possession • Hand Weapon
Strength +2. Bearer must be Gandalf. He gains hunter 1.
Maneuver: Discard this possession to heal a companion (except Gandalf).
R41
Strength +2, the bearer text, and the hunter text should all be on seperate lines.
I think this is underpowered. Perhaps add a damage +1 in, as several other Glamdrings have, or expand that healing ability to multiple companions or healing a companion multiple times.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  First Light On The Fifth Day
Event • Maneuver
Exert 2 companions (except a  companion) to make Gandalf strength +4 and defender +1 until the regroup phase.
U42
"(except companions)" would be better, I think. Looks good otherwise.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Go Back To The Shadow!
Event • Skirmish
Exert Gandalf twice to make him strength +5 and damage +1; if he loses that skirmish, place him in the dead pile.
R43
Nice!  |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 9:27 pm |
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Changes made as suggested, Dain; thanks for reviewing!
I Am Trying To Help You
Event • Skirmish
Exert Gandalf to make a companion strength +1 for each burden you can spot (limit +6).
C44
Fury of the Wizard
Event • Skirmish
Discard 3 cards from hand to make Gandalf strength +1 for each minion you can spot.
C45
The Meaning of Haste
Event • Fellowship
Exert Gandalf to play the fellowship’s next site (replacing an opponent’s site if necessary).
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Last edited by Anonymous Prodigy on Sat Feb 24, 2007 9:52 am; edited 1 time in totalI had to put something here. |
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:46 pm |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote: Changes made as suggested, Dain; thanks for reviewing! 
Well, my wife is at an all-night school thing, so I have the time now, too.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  I Am Trying To Help You
Event • Skirmish
Exert Gandalf to make a  companion strength +1 for each burden you can spot (limit +6).
C44
Interesting. Nifty idea, but I’d either lower the limit or increase the twilight cost a little bit.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Wrath of the Wizard
Event • Skirmish
Discard 3  cards from hand to make Gandalf strength +1 for each minion you can spot.
C45
Not too fond of the title, but that’s my only complaint.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Show Us the Meaning of Haste
Event • Fellowship
Exert Gandalf to play the fellowship’s next site (replacing an opponent’s site if necessary).
C46
Another title issue: maybe drop it down to just "The Meaning of Haste". I have a card very much like this, though, so obviously I like it.  |
Best regards, Dáin, Vice Aftokrator of the Chosen Ones
Check out Lasting Alliances, The Road Ahead, and Ages of Middle-earth, three of my five dream card sets that make up Wars of the Ring. Oh, and I have a trade list now!
Also, if you're into DCs or RPGs (or even if you're not!), check out Realms of Middle-earth, the sequel to CG's "DC Adventure", Realms of the North! |
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Mouth of Saruman |
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 11:22 pm |
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  I Am Trying To Help You
Event • Skirmish
Exert Gandalf to make a  companion strength +1 for each burden you can spot (limit +6).
Either up the cost to or lower the limit to +4. Could be very powerful in a Hobbit/Gandalf, Leader of the Company deck. I like the idea behind it.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Wrath of the Wizard
Event • Skirmish
Discard 3  cards from hand to make Gandalf strength +1 for each minion you can spot.
I agree with Dáin about the title. "Wrath" just doesn’t seem very Gandalf-ish. Perhaps "fury?" I’d really need to know the scene upon which this card was based, though. Good card.
Anonymous Prodigy wrote:  Show Us the Meaning of Haste
Event • Fellowship
Exert Gandalf to play the fellowship’s next site (replacing an opponent’s site if necessary).
Again, my only issue is the title. I’d shorten it to either "The Meaning of Haste" or simply "Meaning of Haste;" your choice. Nice job on these cards! |
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