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| sickofpalantirs |
![]() Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 12:35 pm |
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lem0nhead wrote: Damn foiled by my own foolish logic. 
and the troll who almost kills aragorn has a sword 
lem0nhead wrote:
 Black Land Blade 
Possession • Hand Weapon
Strength: +2
Bearer must be an Orc.
If the shadow has Ardor, each time bearer is assigned to a skirmish add  .
The blades of Mordor bit deep.
C
works for me
 Black Land Battle Armor
Possession • Armor
Strength: +1
Bearer must be an minion.
Response:If bearer is about to take a wound, discard this possession to prevent that.
Mordor armor was made from whatever sturdy metal could be found.
C
maybe and exert a character bearer is skirmishing or something
Black Land Hammer
Possession • Hand Weapon
Strength: +4
Bearer must be an Troll.
If you can spot 3 invaders this possession’s twilight cost is -2.
"..and wielded heavy hammers in their knotted hands."
U
sure not that trolls need the strength at least not that much
Black Land Shield
Possession • Shield
Bearer must be an minion.
Each companion skirmishing bearer does not gain strength or damage bonuses from possessions.
"..but they bore round bucklers huge and black.."
U
add something else to it. they gain invader or whatnot |
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| Thranduil |
![]() Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 12:52 pm |
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lem0nhead wrote: Black Land Blade
Possession • Hand Weapon
Strength: +2
Bearer must be an Orc.
If the shadow has Ardor, each time bearer is assigned to a skirmish add .
The blades of Mordor bit deep.
C
I thought we weren’t capitalising ’ardor’? Whatever, it’s your set! Ambush would streamline the card, but I understand if you don’t want to use it.
lem0nhead wrote: Black Land Battle Armor
Possession • Armor
Strength: +1
Bearer must be an minion.
Response:If bearer is about to take a wound, discard this possession to prevent that.
Mordor armor was made from whatever sturdy metal could be found.
C
Not much to say but good one all in all.
lem0nhead wrote: Black Land Hammer
Possession • Hand Weapon
Strength: +4
Bearer must be an Troll.
If you can spot 3 invaders this possession’s twilight cost is -2.
"..and wielded heavy hammers in their knotted hands."
U
Yep, +4 might be a bit much. +3 is probably enough.
lem0nhead wrote: Black Land Shield
Possession • Shield
Bearer must be an minion.
Each companion skirmishing bearer does not gain strength or damage bonuses from possessions.
"..but they bore round bucklers huge and black.."
U
Add a vitality or strength bonus and it’s solid! Otherwise, not so useful.
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| elf lvr |
![]() Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 3:12 pm |
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I agree with Thran.
Oh, and the hammer is missing a comma after "invaders." |
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| lem0nhead |
![]() Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 3:20 am |
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| Anonymous Prodigy |
![]() Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:56 am |
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lem0nhead wrote: • Wind of War
Condition • Support Area
For each two invaders you can spot, each Orc is strength +1.
Skirmish: Discard this condition to make an strength +3 (or +4 if that is an invader).
"..the Vale of Anduin waited for the onset of a ruinous storm."
C
I would drop the cost to and give it toil 1. 
lem0nhead wrote: Breach the Defenses
Condition • Support Area
Each time an invader wins a skirmish you may discard this condition to make the free peoples player discard one of his or her conditions.
"’They have taken the wall!’ men cried. ’They are blasting breaches in it. They are coming!’"
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The Free Peoples player should have a way to prevent it IMO, such as adding  . 
lem0nhead wrote: • Devouring Light
Condition • Support Area
To play spot 2 minions.
While the fellowship is unbalanced, each unbound companion is strength -1.
Maneuver: Discard this condition to make each companion strength -1 until the regroup phase.
"Far above a great cloud streamed slowly westward from the Black Land.."
R
I would drop the cost to . Neat cards! |
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| lem0nhead |
![]() Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:59 am |
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Thanks AP ill wait for other reviews but  good to have you back active in the DC forum. |
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| Thranduil |
![]() Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:38 am |
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lem0nhead wrote: • Wind of War
Condition • Support Area
For each two invaders you can spot, each Orc is strength +1.
Skirmish: Discard this condition to make an strength +3 (or +4 if that is an invader).
"..the Vale of Anduin waited for the onset of a ruinous storm."
C
Good card, but a bit clumsy. Maybe you could replace the first ability with a kind of burrito, so something like: ’While you can spot 2 invaders, each Orc is strength +1. While you can spot 4 invaders, each Orc is strength +1’, then you’re limiting what could possibly be a too powerful ability as well as making it a little more elegant and flowing. You could even change the boost that way, so maybe +3 altogether for having 4?
lem0nhead wrote: Breach the Defenses
Condition • Support Area
Each time an invader wins a skirmish you may discard this condition to make the free peoples player discard one of his or her conditions.
"’They have taken the wall!’ men cried. ’They are blasting breaches in it. They are coming!’"
U
Nice, though AP does have a point as cards like giving the Free Peoples player unreasonable choices (for example the card ’Unreasonable Choice’).
lem0nhead wrote: • Devouring Light
Condition • Support Area
To play spot 2 minions.
While the fellowship is unbalanced, each unbound companion is strength -1.
Maneuver: Discard this condition to make each companion strength -1 until the regroup phase.
"Far above a great cloud streamed slowly westward from the Black Land.."
R
is a bit much for a shadow condition. Maybe you could make it exert 2 minions and take it down to or something similar? Love the abilities though - very Orkish.
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| sickofpalantirs |
![]() Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 12:03 pm |
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lem0nhead wrote:
• Wind of War
Condition • Support Area
For each two invaders you can spot, each Orc is strength +1.
Skirmish: Discard this condition to make an strength +3 (or +4 if that is an invader).
"..the Vale of Anduin waited for the onset of a ruinous storm."
C
cool! maybe +4 if they have ardor, but your choice
Breach the Defenses
Condition • Support Area
Each time an invader wins a skirmish you may discard this condition to make the free peoples player discard one of his or her conditions.
"’They have taken the wall!’ men cried. ’They are blasting breaches in it. They are coming!’"
U
maybe or 2 conditions if you can spot a fortification.
• Devouring Light
Condition • Support Area
To play spot 2 minions.
While the fellowship is unbalanced, each unbound companion is strength -1.
Maneuver: Discard this condition to make each companion strength -1 until the regroup phase.
"Far above a great cloud streamed slowly westward from the Black Land.."
R
nice! |
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| elf lvr |
![]() Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:10 pm |
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lem0nhead wrote: • Wind of War
Condition • Support Area
For each two invaders you can spot, each Orc is strength +1.
Skirmish: Discard this condition to make an strength +3 (or +4 if that is an invader).
"..the Vale of Anduin waited for the onset of a ruinous storm."
C
The wording is okay (just like Encirclement, right?) but it seems pretty darn powerful... maybe limit the initial strength boost to +2 and +4 if the minion is an invader.
Quote: Breach the Defenses
Condition • Support Area
Each time an invader wins a skirmish you may discard this condition to make the free peoples player discard one of his or her conditions.
"’They have taken the wall!’ men cried. ’They are blasting breaches in it. They are coming!’"
U
This card is okay, because it’s already making the freeps player make a choice... WHICH of their conditions to discard? Unless they only have one condition. And if they only have one condition, it deserves to be discarded.
Quote: • Devouring Light
Condition • Support Area
To play spot 2 minions.
While the fellowship is unbalanced, each unbound companion is strength -1.
Maneuver: Discard this condition to make each companion strength -1 until the regroup phase.
"Far above a great cloud streamed slowly westward from the Black Land.."
R
The cost could drop by .
Neat cards. |
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| NBarden |
![]() Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:04 pm |
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lem0nhead wrote: Thranduil wrote:
I thought we weren’t capitalising ’ardor’?
Thranduil
Oops. Darn it. Im not! The text file i made these in was done before you pointed that out!
Thanks for the reviews guys. Have some conditions.
• Wind of War
Condition • Support Area
For each two invaders you can spot, each Orc is strength +1.
Skirmish: Discard this condition to make an strength +3 (or +4 if that is an invader).
"..the Vale of Anduin waited for the onset of a ruinous storm."
C
Another unavoidable wording problem. Meh. Should be uncommon.
Breach the Defenses
Condition • Support Area
Each time an invader wins a skirmish you may discard this condition to make the free peoples player discard one of his or her conditions.
"’They have taken the wall!’ men cried. ’They are blasting breaches in it. They are coming!’"
U
Nice. Should be common.
• Devouring Light
Condition • Support Area
To play spot 2 minions.
While the fellowship is unbalanced, each unbound companion is strength -1.
Maneuver: Discard this condition to make each companion strength -1 until the regroup phase.
"Far above a great cloud streamed slowly westward from the Black Land.."
R
Nice. |
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