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Foresight |
Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 4:59 pm |
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You guys have been wonderful in refining my cards, this topic has been my most fruitful DC venture yet! And it’s far from finishing! (If it ever will...)
Machine of War
Possession • Support Area
Machine. When you play this possession, you may spot another machine to add an token here.
Maneuver: Liberate a site you control to add an token to a machine.
•Wood Splintered
Condition • Support Area
Each time you add an token to a machine, you may stack an card from hand here.
Regroup: Discard any number of cards stacked on this condition to take control of a site. The Free Peoples player may add threats equal to the number of cards discarded to prevent that. Discard this condition.
Frightful Uruk
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength: 11
Vitality: 2
Site Number: 5
Damage +1. When you play this minion, you may remove an token from a machine to make this minion’s twilight cost -1.
Ladders Rising
Event • Shadow
Spot Saruman or exert an Uruk-hai to play a machine from your draw deck.
Breaking Like Water on Rock
Event • Skirmish
Make an minion strength +1 for each machine you can spot, then the Free Peoples player may discard one of those machines. |
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Thranduil |
Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 5:31 pm |
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Foresight wrote: You guys have been wonderful in refining my cards, this topic has been my most fruitful DC venture yet! And it’s far from finishing! (If it ever will...)
It helps that you make good cards that we want to review!
Machine of War
Possession • Support Area
Machine. When you play this possession, you may spot another machine to add an  token here.
Maneuver: Liberate a site you control to add an  token to a machine.
Nice, but a high cost for not so much benefit.
 • Wood Splintered
Condition • Support Area
Each time you add an  token to a machine, you may place an  card from hand here.
Regroup: Discard any number of cards on this condition to take control of a site. The Free Peoples player may add threats equal to the number of cards discarded to prevent that. Discard this condition.
Very interesting. I like it.
Frightful Uruk
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength: 11
Vitality: 2
Site Number: 5
Damage +1. When you play this minion, you may remove an  token from a machine to make this minion twilight cost -1.
Well, I guess he’s a little frightful. Removing X tokens for -X would be funny, but almost certainly too good without reducing his stats.
Ladders Rising
Event • Shadow
Spot Saruman or exert an Uruk-hai to play a machine from your draw deck.
Excellent! That’s what the old machines need, especially with the classic beserkers!
Breaking Like Water on Rock
Event • Skirmish
Make an  minion strength +1 for each machine you can spot, then discard one of those machines.
Yeah, but the breaking like water on a rock was bad for the uruks! Make it, ’Spot X machines to make an minion strength +X’, and then I’d give the choice which one is discarded to the Free Peoples player (which fits better with the title anyway).
Great stuff!
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 5:42 pm |
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Foresight wrote: Machine of War
Possession • Support Area
Machine. When you play this possession, you may spot another machine to add an  token here.
Maneuver: Liberate a site you control to add an  token to a machine.
I think you can safely make it cost .
Foresight wrote:  • Wood Splintered
Condition • Support Area
Each time you add an  token to a machine, you may place an  card from hand here.
Regroup: Discard any number of cards on this condition to take control of a site. The Free Peoples player may add threats equal to the number of cards discarded to prevent that. Discard this condition.
I think it should be "stack" instead of "place". But I love it otherwise.
Foresight wrote: Frightful Uruk
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength: 11
Vitality: 2
Site Number: 5
Damage +1. When you play this minion, you may remove an  token from a machine to make this minion twilight cost -1.
"minion’s twilight cost -1" instead of "minion twilight cost -1", I think.
Foresight wrote: Ladders Rising
Event • Shadow
Spot Saruman or exert an Uruk-hai to play a machine from your draw deck.
Nice and simple. Good.
Foresight wrote: Breaking Like Water on Rock
Event • Skirmish
Make an  minion strength +1 for each machine you can spot, then discard one of those machines.
Nice way of turning that quote against the FP. I agree with Thranduil: let the FP choose which machine to discard. |
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Foresight |
Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 5:16 am |
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Hey guys, before I turn out some more DCs, does any of you know the name of the bomb that Saruman made? (The one that blew up the wall of Helms Deep) |
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Thranduil |
Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 5:35 am |
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Devilry of Orthanc. Beyond that, it has no name that I know of.
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 6:41 am |
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Foresight wrote: You guys have been wonderful in refining my cards, this topic has been my most fruitful DC venture yet! And it’s far from finishing! (If it ever will...)
Machine of War
Possession • Support Area
Machine. When you play this possession, you may spot another machine to add an  token here.
Maneuver: Liberate a site you control to add an  token to a machine.
sure
 • Wood Splintered
Condition • Support Area
Each time you add an  token to a machine, you may stack an  card from hand here.
Regroup: Discard any number of cards stacked on this condition to take control of a site. The Free Peoples player may add threats equal to the number of cards discarded to prevent that. Discard this condition.
cool! make it or discard a condition if you don’t want to control a site.
Frightful Uruk
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength: 11
Vitality: 2
Site Number: 5
Damage +1. When you play this minion, you may remove an  token from a machine to make this minion’s twilight cost -1.
should be
When you play this minion, you may remove an token from a machine to make him twilight cost -1.
Ladders Rising
Event • Shadow
Spot Saruman or exert an Uruk-hai to play a machine from your draw deck.
cool
Breaking Like Water on Rock
Event • Skirmish
Make an  minion strength +1 for each machine you can spot, then the Free Peoples player may discard one of those machines.
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Foresight |
Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 9:39 pm |
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Embodiment of Evil
Event • Maneuver
Exert Saruman twice to choose one: Add 2 threats, add a burden, reinforce 2 or tokens, or exert a companion. The Free Peoples player may discard a Free Peoples card from hand to prevent this.
•Saruman’s Invention
Possession • Support Area
Machine. When you play this machine, you may choose one: spot an minion to add an token here, or spot an minion to add an token here.
Maneuver: Remove 3 tokens from here to make an Uruk-hai strength +2 until the regroup phase.
Maneuver: Remove 3 tokens from here to make an Uruk-hai damage +1 until the regroup phase.
Blinding Blow
Event • Skirmish
Make an Uruk-hai strength +X, where X is the number of tokens you can spot (Limit +4).
Skewered Assault
Event • Skirmish
Make an Uruk-hai strength +x, where X is the number of tokens you can spot (Limit +4).
•Siege Master, Fearsome Overseer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength: 13
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Damage +1. When you play Siege Master, you may remove 2 tokens from a machine to make his twilight cost -1.
Skirmish: Remove 3 tokens from a machine and discard an card from hand to make Siege Master strength +3.
Changes: Thranduil’s suggestions. |
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 10:32 am |
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Foresight wrote: Embodiment of Evil
Event • Maneuver
Exert Saruman twice to choose one: Add 2 threats, add a burden, reinforce 2  or  tokens, or exert a companion. The Free Peoples player may discard a companion from hand to prevent this.
from hand...sure
 • Saruman’s Invention
Possession • Support Area
Machine. When you play this machine, you may choose one: spot an  minion to add an  token here, or spot an  minion to add an  token here.
Maneuver: Remove 3  tokens from here to make an Uruk-hai strength +2 until the regroup phase.
Maneuver: Remove 3  tokens from here to make an Uruk-hai damage +1 until the regroup phase.
uh sure
Blinding Blow
Event • Skirmish
Make an  Uruk-hai strength +X, where X is the number of  tokens you can spot (Limit +4).
cool!
Skewered Assault
Event • Skirmish
Make an  Uruk-hai strength +x, where X is the number of  tokens you can spot (Limit +4).
nice!
 • Seige Master, Fearsome Overseer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength: 13
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Damage +1. When you play Seige Master, you may remove 2  tokens from a machine to make his twilight cost -1.
Skirmish: Remove 3  tokens from a machine and discard an  card from hand to make Seige Master strength +3.
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Thranduil |
Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 4:35 pm |
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Foresight wrote: Embodiment of Evil
Event • Maneuver
Exert Saruman twice to choose one: Add 2 threats, add a burden, reinforce 2  or  tokens, or exert a companion. The Free Peoples player may discard a companion from hand to prevent this.
I like it, but I have two issues.
1) The normal (decipher) way of doing the ’choose one’ abilities is a semi-colon ( ; ) between each of the options.
2) The get out clause might as well not be there for all the difference it makes - who’s going to have companions in their hand in the maneuver phase? Make it free peoples card, or 2 free peoples cards, or character, or simply get rid of it.
 • Saruman’s Invention
Possession • Support Area
Machine. When you play this machine, you may choose one: spot an  minion to add an  token here, or spot an  minion to add an  token here.
Maneuver: Remove 3  tokens from here to make an Uruk-hai strength +2 until the regroup phase.
Maneuver: Remove 3  tokens from here to make an Uruk-hai damage +1 until the regroup phase.
They’ve never done something like this before, and while I envisage it being very cool, it’s also very complicated. Plus, I wouldn’t make the ability choose one, I’d make it do both.
Blinding Blow
Event • Skirmish
Make an  Uruk-hai strength +X, where X is the number of  tokens you can spot (Limit +4).
Not good enough. Should say ’Uruk-hai’.
Skewered Assault
Event • Skirmish
Make an  Uruk-hai strength +x, where X is the number of  tokens you can spot (Limit +4).
I understand why you did this, but it’s too specific. In a bi-cultural deck you don’t want events that only boost one of the cultures you’re using (in general) so I think this should also say ’Uruk-hai’.
 • Siege Master, Fearsome Overseer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength: 13
Vitality: 3
Site Number: 5
Damage +1. When you play Siege Master, you may remove 2  tokens from a machine to make his twilight cost -1.
Skirmish: Remove 3  tokens from a machine and discard an  card from hand to make Siege Master strength +3.
Good stuff! I love the multicultural engine you’ve got going.
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Foresight |
Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 9:25 pm |
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Thranduil wrote: Foresight wrote: Embodiment of Evil
Event • Maneuver
Exert Saruman twice to choose one: Add 2 threats, add a burden, reinforce 2  or  tokens, or exert a companion. The Free Peoples player may discard a companion from hand to prevent this.
I like it, but I have two issues.
1) The normal (decipher) way of doing the ’choose one’ abilities is a semi-colon ( ; ) between each of the options.
2) The get out clause might as well not be there for all the difference it makes - who’s going to have companions in their hand in the maneuver phase? Make it free peoples card, or 2 free peoples cards, or character, or simply get rid of it.
Decipher’s grammar isn’t that impressive, so I’ll keep the colon. I just changed it to Free Peoples card.  |
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