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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 12:07 pm |
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Good article, sop. The basic concept of the strategy was fairly solid, but your grammar could really use some editing. I give it a 3. |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 5:59 pm |
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Cobra wrote: You can only submit a new article if it’s really a different concept; in this case I think you’re better off just editing this one.
OK thanks Cobra
OK I just edited it. Any better? |
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maxidoodle |
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:35 pm |
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PorterTroll |
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 10:18 pm |
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i think i’m gonna wait to vote, i have to read the edited version first |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 7:15 am |
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PorterTroll wrote: i think i’m gonna wait to vote, i have to read the edited version first
OK take your time I just fixed some errors |
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YourStinkenFace |
Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 12:07 pm |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:06 pm |
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YourStinkenFace wrote: Mesa dike dis
i like this? |
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"DáinIronfoot"
Spammers really are amazing creatures. You can learn all there is to know about their ways in a month. And yet, after a hundred years, they can still surprise you. |
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AnxiousChieftain |
Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:08 pm |
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A decent article. It still has several of the mistakes that hblika pointed out, so you’ll get a 3 from me. |
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AdultLink |
Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 7:34 am |
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You did well for one of your first article attempts SoP. I think you deserve a bit higher than a 3 but it’s not quite a 4. Thanks for writing it! |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 7:36 am |
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AnxiousChieftain wrote: A decent article. It still has several of the mistakes that hblika pointed out, so you’ll get a 3 from me.
it does oh well. i guess, I thought i edited them out.
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