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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 3:19 pm |
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elf lvr wrote: This is old, but I’m bumping it up. It’d be cool if someone could review the other cards as well.
point me to them fellow Hippotis. Oh wait I already reviewed them
*Ulaire Toldea, Terrible Specter
Minion-Nazgul
Strength: 12
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Fierce.
When you play Ulaire Toldea, you may discard 3 cards from hand to take a minion from your discard pile into hand.
Skirmish: Exert Ulaire Toldea and discard a minion from hand to make Ulaire Toldea strength +3.
0U165
I would make it exert him and discard a card. It just sounds better to me.
*Deathless Spirits
Condition-Support Area
Each time a wraith is played, add a threat.
Skirmish: Remove two threats to remove a minion from your discard pile from the game and make a minion strength +3.
0U165
the wording is no good. it should be Remove two threats and remove a wraith minion in your discard pile from the game, to make a minion strength +3.
consider a limit.
Vengeful Spirit
Minion-Wraith
Strength: 7
Vitality: 2
Site: 2
Twilight.
When you play this minion, you may discard two cards from hand to take a card from your discard pile into hand. You cannot play that card this turn. Discard that card at the end of the turn.
Skirmish: Exert this minion and reveal a card from your hand to make this minion strength +2 and Fierce until the regroup phase.
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that ability is to complicated. I know what you are getting at, but I think you should make it a maneuver ability, and cut the requirement of not playing it this turn. with the maneuver ability, make it exert him, so that you don’t need a limit |
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elf lvr |
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:50 pm |
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Thanks for the reviews, Dain and SoP.
I’ll change up the Spirit, what do you think of it now? |
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elf lvr |
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:11 pm |
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And here’s the last 4 cards...
*Ulaire Otsea, Wraith of Flame
Minion * Nazgul
Strength: 9
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Enduring.
Each time Ulaire Otsea is discarded from your hand, you may make a minion strength +2 and damage +1 until the regroup phase.
Skirmish: Remove 2 threats to return Ulaire Otsea to your hand.
0C168
Like that? I do.
*Ulaire Cantea, Wraith of Flame
Minion * Nazgul
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Fierce.
Skirmish: Discard a card from hand to make Ulaire Cantea strength +1 (or +2 if the discarded card was a twilight minion).
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Rotting Corpses
Minion * Wraith
Strength: 10
Vitality: 2
Site: 2
Twilight. Enduring.
Each time this minion is killed in a skirmish, you may exert a companion involved in that skirmish.
Maneuver: Discard a card from hand and spot a twilight minion to return this minion from your discard pile to your hand.
0C170
*Faces in the Water
Condition * Support Area
Each time a minion is discarded from your hand, you may remove a threat to exert a minion.
Skirmish: Discard this condition and spot your twilight minion to use that minion’s skirmish special ability, ignoring costs.
0C171
I don’t know how to word that one... help? |
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:45 pm |
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elf lvr wrote: *Ulaire Otsea, Wraith of Flame
Minion * Nazgul
Strength: 9
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Enduring.
If Ulaire Otsea is discarded from your hand, you may make a minion strength +2 until the regroup phase.
Skirmish: Remove 2 threats to return Ulaire Otsea to your hand.
0C168
YEAH I like that! Perhaps make that discarded-from-hand benefit a wee bit better though, like strength +3 or strength +2 and damage +1, or perhaps even a stronger boost only for twilight minions.
Awesome idea, though.
elf lvr wrote: *Ulaire Cantea, Wraith of Flame
Minion * Nazgul
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Fierce.
Skirmish: Discard a card from hand to make Ulaire Cantea strength +1 (or +2 if the discarded card was a twilight minion).
0C169
Nice!
elf lvr wrote: Rotting Corpses
Minion * Wraith
Strength: 10
Vitality: 2
Site: 2
Twilight. Enduring.
If Rotting Corpses is killed in a skirmish, you may exert a companion involved in that skirmish.
Maneuver: Discard a card from hand to return this card from your discard pile to your hand.
0C170
Unless it’s unique, it should be "this minion" instead of the name in the gametext. Same goes for "this card"...should probably be "this minion".
I think the cost to get him back should be a little harder, too. Perhaps the discard and require spotting another twilight minion?
elf lvr wrote: Faces in the Water
Condition * Support Area
Each time a minion is discarded from your hand, you may remove a threat to exert a minion.
Skirmish: Discard this condition to apply the Skirmish special ability of one of your twilight minions. You do not have to pay the costs of that ability.
0C171
I don’t know how to word that one... help?
Instead of "apply", perhaps do:
Skirmish: Discard this condition and spot your twilight minion to use that minion’s skirmish special ability, ignoring costs.
A lot shorter, and I think cleaner as well. How’s that? |
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sickofpalantirs |
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:03 pm |
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elf lvr wrote: And here’s the last 4 cards...
*Ulaire Otsea, Wraith of Flame
Minion * Nazgul
Strength: 9
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Enduring.
If Ulaire Otsea is discarded from your hand, you may make a minion strength +2 and damage +1 until the regroup phase.
Skirmish: Remove 2 threats to return Ulaire Otsea to your hand.
0C168
how about skirmish remove 2 threats to return ulaire otsea to your hand from your discard pile
*Ulaire Cantea, Wraith of Flame
Minion * Nazgul
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Fierce.
Skirmish: Discard a card from hand to make Ulaire Cantea strength +1 (or +2 if the discarded card was a twilight minion).
0C169
houw about or +2 and damage +1? Right now I think it isn’t worth it
Rotting Corpses
Minion * Wraith
Strength: 10
Vitality: 2
Site: 2
Twilight. Enduring.
If this minion is killed in a skirmish, you may exert a companion involved in that skirmish.
Maneuver: Discard a card from hand and spot a twilight minion to return this minion from your discard pile to your hand.
0C170
works for me
Faces in the Water
Condition * Support Area
Each time a minion is discarded from your hand, you may remove a threat to exert a minion.
Skirmish: Discard this condition and spot your twilight minion to use that minion’s skirmish special ability, ignoring costs.
0C171
its certainly a weird ability, ask someone else, though right now I think it needs at least 2 cost. |
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AnxiousChieftain |
Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 9:46 am |
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elf lvr wrote: *Ulaire Otsea, Wraith of Flame
Minion * Nazgul
Strength: 9
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Enduring.
If Ulaire Otsea is discarded from your hand, you may make a minion strength +2 and damage +1 until the regroup phase.
Skirmish: Remove 2 threats to return Ulaire Otsea to your hand.
0C168
Nice, although I would personally say ’Each time Ulaire Otsea...’ instead of ’If Ulaire Otsea...’. It just seems smoother.
elf lvr wrote: *Ulaire Cantea, Wraith of Flame
Minion * Nazgul
Strength: 10
Vitality: 3
Site: 3
Twilight. Fierce.
Skirmish: Discard a card from hand to make Ulaire Cantea strength +1 (or +2 if the discarded card was a twilight minion).
0C169
Awesome.
elf lvr wrote: Rotting Corpses
Minion * Wraith
Strength: 10
Vitality: 2
Site: 2
Twilight. Enduring.
If this minion is killed in a skirmish, you may exert a companion involved in that skirmish.
Maneuver: Discard a card from hand and spot a twilight minion to return this minion from your discard pile to your hand.
0C170
Again, I’d use ’Each time’ instead of ’If’. Neat card though.
elf lvr wrote: Faces in the Water
Condition * Support Area
Each time a minion is discarded from your hand, you may remove a threat to exert a minion.
Skirmish: Discard this condition and spot your twilight minion to use that minion’s skirmish special ability, ignoring costs.
0C171
Cool. You might want to make it unique though. |
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elf lvr |
Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 1:37 pm |
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Lets start off with our companions... some fun stuff coming up here! Here’s your new keyword:
Stealthy. Each time a stealth card of this character’s culture is played, this character is strength +1 until the regroup phase.
Let’s start off with the most famously stealthy hobbit of all... Mr. Bilbo Baggins!
*Bilbo, Legendary Burglar
Companion * Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 8
Ring-Bound. Stealthy.
Each time the fellowship moves, you may discard a card from hand to take a stealth card from your discard pile into hand.
Regroup: Exert Bilbo and discard a stealth card from hand to remove a burden.
"Sackville-Baginses! Let’s keep out of sight for now, shall we?"
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When you move, you can take a stealth card... then either play it, or use it to remove a burden! This burglar has a few useful tricks up his sleeve, wouldn’t you say?
*Sam, Keeper of the Stair
Companion * Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 9
Ring-Bound. Stealthy.
While Sam bears the One Ring, he is resistance –4.
Each time a stealth event is played, you may exert Sam to wound a minion.
Response: If Frodo is killed, make Sam the Ring-bearer.
"There is some monster on our Stair..."
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Now, a R stealth event and condition...
*On Forgotten Paths
Condition * Support Area
Stealth.
You may only play this condition at a forest, underground, or marsh site.
You may add a threat to play this condition any time you could play a skirmish event.
Skirmish: Exert a hobbit twice to cancel a skirmish involving that hobbit. If the fellowship is not at a forest, underground, or marsh site, the shadow player may remove to prevent that.
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A Noble Distraction
Event * Maneuver
Stealth.
If the fellowship is in region 1 or 2, spot an unbound hobbit to prevent minions from being assigned to Ring-Bound companions until the regroup phase.
If the fellowship is in region 3, heal the Ring-Bearer twice.
"Hey, you! Over here! Over here!
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 1:54 pm |
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elf lvr wrote: *Bilbo, Legendary Burglar
Companion * Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 8
Ring-Bound. Stealthy.
Each time the fellowship moves, you may discard a card from hand to take a stealth card from your discard pile into hand.
Regroup: Exert Bilbo and discard a stealth card from hand to remove a burden.
"Sackville-Baginses! Let’s keep out of sight for now, shall we?"
0R127
When you move, you can take a stealth card... then either play it, or use it to remove a burden! This burglar has a few useful tricks up his sleeve, wouldn’t you say?
Very, very cool!
elf lvr wrote: *Sam, Keeper of the Stair
Companion * Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 9
Ring-Bound. Stealthy.
While Sam bears the One Ring, he is resistance –4.
Each time a stealth event is played, you may exert Sam to wound a minion.
Response: If Frodo is killed, make Sam the Ring-bearer.
"There is some monster on our Stair..."
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He’s neat, but since he also gets a strength boost from the stealth card, I might exert the minion instead of wound. Wait for a second opinion before you do that, though. I’m on the fence about it.
Oh, make sure to bold Ring-bearer.
elf lvr wrote: *On Forgotten Paths
Condition * Support Area
Stealth.
You may only play this condition at a forest, underground, or marsh site.
You may add a threat to play this condition any time you could play a skirmish event.
Skirmish: Exert a hobbit twice to cancel a skirmish involving that hobbit. If the fellowship is not at a forest, underground, or marsh site, the shadow player may remove to prevent that.
0R129
Make sure capitalize "Hobbit". And also make sure there’s text making it clear the Ring-bearer can’t use that skirmish ability.
elf lvr wrote: A Noble Distraction
Event * Maneuver
Stealth.
If the fellowship is in region 1 or 2, spot an unbound hobbit to prevent minions from being assigned to Ring-Bound companions until the regroup phase.
If the fellowship is in region 3, heal an unbound hobbit twice.
"Hey, you! Over here! Over here!
0R130
Nice! I like that. |
Best regards, Dáin, Vice Aftokrator of the Chosen Ones
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:13 pm |
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elf lvr wrote: -4R-6U-5C
*Bilbo, Legendary Burglar
Companion * Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 8
Ring-Bound. Stealthy.
Each time the fellowship moves, you may discard a card from hand to take a stealth card from your discard pile into hand.
Regroup: Exert Bilbo and discard a stealth card from hand to remove a burden.
"Sackville-Baginses! Let’s keep out of sight for now, shall we?"
0R127
stealth event maybe instead of stealth card? does the job
*Sam, Keeper of the Stair
Companion * Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 9
Ring-Bound. Stealthy.
While Sam bears the One Ring, he is resistance –4.
Each time a stealth event is played, you may exert Sam to wound a minion.
Response: If Frodo is killed, make Sam the Ring-bearer.
"There is some monster on our Stair..."
0R128
hum, again good card. maybe while sam is the ring-bearer is the correct wording
*On Forgotten Paths
Condition * Support Area
Stealth.
You may only play this condition at a forest, underground, or marsh site.
You may add a threat to play this condition any time you could play a skirmish event.
Skirmish: Exert a hobbit twice to cancel a skirmish involving that hobbit. If the fellowship is not at a forest, underground, or marsh site, the shadow player may remove to prevent that.
0R129
boy could you gut one of those options? just a spammer’s opinion though.
A Noble Distraction
Event * Maneuver
Stealth.
If the fellowship is in region 1 or 2, spot an unbound hobbit to prevent minions from being assigned to Ring-Bound companions until the regroup phase.
If the fellowship is in region 3, heal an unbound hobbit twice.
"Hey, you! Over here! Over here!
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"DáinIronfoot"
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 8:24 pm |
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Some changes made.
To Dain: There is a rule in the rulebook that skirmishes involving the R-B can’t be cancelled, so no worries there.
To SoP: That is how D worded it on the latest version of Sam. So I am assuming that it’s right.
Now, here’s some more cards! GP to the first review!
*Merry, Sly Fellow
Companion * Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 9
Stealthy.
Each time a Stealth card is played, you may add a threat to heal a companion.
Skirmish: Exert Merry and discard your Stealth card from hand or play to make another companion strength +2.
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*Pippin, Sly Fellow
Companion * Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitality: 4
Resistance: 9
Stealthy.
While you can spot 2 other Stealthy companions, Pippin cannot be overwhelmed unless his strength is tripled.
Regroup: Exert Pippin and add a burden to return a Stealth card from your discard pile to your hand.
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Through the Hobbiton Woods
Event * Skirmish
Stealth.
Exert a hobbit to make that hobbit strength +3 (or cancel a skirmish involving that hobbit if it is at a forest site).
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