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Donkey_Kong_JR |
Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 10:54 pm |
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here are a few random DCs I’ve come up with
•Frodo, Bearer of the One Ring
Companion • Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitatly: 4
Ringed Resistence: 10
Ring Bearer. Ring Bound.
While you can spot another Hobbit companion, Frodo is strength +1.
Response: If the fellowship is about to move during the regroup phase, exert Frodo to remove . (limit )
•Galadriel, Passing into the West
Companion • Elf
Strength: 3
Vitatly: 3
Resistence: 7
To play spot an Elf companion.
Fellowship: Exert Galadriel to discard the top card of your draw deck. Remove (X) where X is the twilight cost of that card. (limit once per turn)
•Deagol, Bearer of Curroisty
Companion
Strength: 4
Vitatly: 3
Ringed Resistence: 6
To play add a burden unless a companion is your Ring Bearer.
While Deagol is the Ring-bearer, Shadow cards may spot him as unbound.
Response: If a shadow players plays an event or a condition, exert Deagol to discard that event or condition. The shadow player may exert a minion and remove to prevent this
•Gimli, Last Dwarf in Moria
Companion • Dwarf
Strength: 6
Vitatly: 3
Resistence: 7
Damage +1.
While the fellowship is at an underground or mountain site, Gimli is strength +1 and Damage +1.
Skirmish: Exert Gimli twice and spot another Dwarf to make the current site an underground site. |
Last edited by Donkey_Kong_JR on Sat Feb 03, 2007 10:36 am; edited 7 times in total |
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macheteman |
Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:53 pm |
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hey, just some tips on the DC format and stuff, by putting brackets [] around the culture you can make it have the symbol.
and alt+numpad7 makes the dot. •.
and brackets around numbers makes the turn like this:  |
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Donkey_Kong_JR |
Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 1:17 am |
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cool, thanks for the tips |
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thonnas7 |
Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 3:11 am |
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Alright, I like where you’re going with these cards, but they need some re-wording. Try these.
•Frodo, Bearer of the One Ring
Companion • Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitatly: 4
Ringed Resistence: 10
Ring Bearer. Ring Bound.
While you can spot another Hobbit companion, Frodo is strength +1.
Response: If the fellowship has moved is about to move during the regroup phase, exert Frodo to remove . (Limit )
The only change I made here was on the last line of text. With what you had, you could only use the action once, therefore, the limit was useless. With this you can use it multiple times, but only 3 times.
•Galadriel, Passing into the West
Companion • Elf
Strength: 3
Vitatly: 3
Resistence: 7
To play, spot an companion.
Fellowship: Exert Galadriel to discard the top card of your draw deck. Remove [X] where X is the twilight cost of that card. (Limit once per turn)
I just changed Galadriel’s twilight cost, back to her normal 3. She was too powerful at 1 twilight.
•Deagol, Bearer of Curroisty
Companion
Strength: 4
Vitatly: 3
Ringed Resistence: 6
To play, add a burden (unless Smeagol bears The One Ring).
While Deagol is the Ring-bearer, shadows cards do not affect Deagol.
Response: If a shadow players plays an event or a condition, exert Deagol to return that event or condition to it’s owners hand. The shadow player may exert a minion to prevent this.
Alright, I made some major changes. Before, there was just too much text to fit on one card. I shortened everything up, balanced it powerwise a little more. Take a look and see if you like it. It basically does the same thing.
•Gimli, Last Dwarf in Moria
Companion • Dwarf
Strength: 6
Vitatly: 3
Resistence: 7
Damage +1.
While the fellowship is at an underground or mountain site, Gimli is strength +1 and Damage +1.
Skirmish: Exert Gimli twice and spot another Dwarf to replace the fellowship’s current site with an underground site from your adventure deck.
Alright, instead of making a site suddenly sink underground, I changed this card where it just replaces sites. Also, it causes two exertions so you can’t do it at every site unless you have major healing. |
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Donkey_Kong_JR |
Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:57 am |
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ok, but why did you change Deagol’s second line of text, the one about when he’s the Ring Bearer. Before it was a draw back, but with how you changed it, it’s an advantage. |
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:10 am |
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thonnas7 wrote:  •Frodo, Bearer of the One Ring
Companion • Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitatly: 4
Ringed Resistence: 10
Ring Bearer. Ring Bound.
While you can spot another Hobbit companion, Frodo is strength +1.
Response: If the fellowship moved is about to move during the regroup phase, exert Frodo to remove  . (Limit  )
The only change I made here was on the last line of text. With what you had, you could only use the action once, therefore, the limit was useless. With this you can use it multiple times, but only 3 times.
Yeah, that works better, DK Jr. One more tweak:
Response: If the fellowship is about to move during the regroup phase, exert Frodo to remove (limit ).
Just a little cleaner. You had both "moved" and "is about to move" in there before.
Quote:  •Galadriel, Passing into the West
Companion • Elf
Strength: 3
Vitatly: 3
Resistence: 7
To play, spot an  companion.
Fellowship: Exert Galadriel to discard the top card of your draw deck. Remove [X] where X is the twilight cost of that card. (Limit once per turn)
I just changed Galadriel’s twilight cost, back to her normal 3. She was too powerful at 1 twilight.
Yeah. That change was needed. Love the idea though, DK!
Quote:  •Deagol, Bearer of Curroisty
Companion
Strength: 4
Vitatly: 3
Ringed Resistence: 6
To play, add a burden (unless Smeagol bears The One Ring).
While Deagol is the Ring-bearer, shadows cards do not affect Deagol.
Response: If a shadow players plays an event or a condition, exert Deagol to return that event or condition to it’s owners hand. The shadow player may exert a minion to prevent this.
Alright, I made some major changes. Before, there was just too much text to fit on one card. I shortened everything up, balanced it powerwise a little more. Take a look and see if you like it. It basically does the same thing. 
Not quite. Needs a couple more tweaks, like the following:
•Deagol, Bearer of Curroisty
Companion
Strength: 4
Vitality: 3
Ringed Resistence: 6
To play, add a burden (unless Smeagol bears The One Ring).
While Deagol is the Ring-bearer, Shadow cards may spot him as unbound.
Response: If a Shadow event or Shadow condition is played, exert Deagol to cancel that and return that card to its owners hand instead. The Shadow player may exert a minion to prevent this.
Still not perfect, but the two abilities are a lot cleaner now. Also, "vitality" was spelled wrong. In fact, double-check the spelling of that for the others, ’cuz I think they may have it wrong, too.
These changes work for you, DK?
Quote:  •Gimli, Last Dwarf in Moria
Companion • Dwarf
Strength: 6
Vitatly: 3
Resistence: 7
Damage +1.
While the fellowship is at an underground or mountain site, Gimli is strength +1 and Damage +1.
Skirmish: Exert Gimli twice and spot another Dwarf to replace the fellowship’s current site with an underground site from your adventure deck.
Alright, instead of making a site suddenly sink underground, I changed this card where it just replaces sites. Also, it causes two exertions so you can’t do it at every site unless you have major healing.
I agree with the two exertions, but I think this majorly changes what DK was trying to do. I’d suggest one of the following:
Skirmish: Exert Gimli and another Dwarf companion to make the fellowship’s current site an underground site.
Skirmish: Exert Gimli and spot another Dwarf companion to make the fellowship’s current site an underground site until the end of the turn.
The first one exerts two Dwarves, though you could also exert Gimli twice and spot another Dwarf and that would be cool too.
The second one still just has one exertion, but limits the length of time that site is an underground site, much in the same spirit as Uruviel, Woodland Maid.
Let me (and thonnas) know what you think, Donkey_Kong_JR. I really like all of these cards...very cool ideas. Have a Gold Point ( ) for your efforts. Hope you decide to stay for a while. |
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Donkey_Kong_JR |
Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:30 am |
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Ok, one question I have though is why did both of you change Deagol’s "To play add a burden unless a companion is the Ring Bearer" to "To play add a burden (unless Smeagol bears the One Ring" I get the "bears the One Ring" part since it sounds a lot cleaner, but why just Smeagol? The idea is that if either Smeagol or Deagol is the Ring Bearer you don’t add a burden to play him. Did Decipher make some ruling I don’t know about where you don’t add a burden to play Smeagol, Bearer of Great Secrets if he’s the Ring bearer or what?
And thanks for the help both of you, I appreciate it. |
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:54 am |
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Oops. Yeah, it was okay as you originally had it. Though maybe, to make it a liitle cleaner, do it like this:
To play, add a burden (unless a companion is the Ring-bearer).
Minor change, I know, but it looks a lot better.  |
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AnxiousChieftain |
Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:58 am |
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Actually, the Ring-bearer technically isn’t ’played’; he is placed in play, and thus Smeagol Bearer of Great Secrets does not add a burden when he is the RB. |
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:09 pm |
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Donkey_Kong_JR wrote: here are a few random DCs I’ve come up with
 •Frodo, Bearer of the One Ring
Companion • Hobbit
Strength: 3
Vitatly: 4
Ringed Resistence: 10
Ring Bearer. Ring Bound.
While you can spot another Hobbit companion, Frodo is strength +1.
Response: If the fellowship is about to move during the regroup phase, exert Frodo to remove  . (limit  )
Interesting....nice card!
 •Galadriel, Passing into the West
Companion • Elf
Strength: 3
Vitatly: 3
Resistence: 7
To play spot an Elf companion.
Fellowship: Exert Galadriel to discard the top card of your draw deck. Remove (X) where X is the twilight cost of that card. (limit once per turn)
That could be very weak or very powerful.....
 •Deagol, Bearer of Curroisty
Companion
Strength: 4
Vitatly: 3
Ringed Resistence: 6
To play add a burden unless a  companion is your Ring Bearer.
While Deagol is the Ring-bearer, Shadow cards may spot him as unbound.
Response: If a shadow players plays an event or a condition, exert Deagol to discard that event or condition. The shadow player may exert a minion or remove  to prevent this
I would change his text to "Discard Deagol to discard a condition."
•Gimli, Last Dwarf in Moria
Companion • Dwarf
Strength: 6
Vitatly: 3
Resistence: 7
[b]Damage +1.
While the fellowship is at an underground or mountain site, Gimli is strength +1 and Damage +1.
Skirmish: Exert Gimli twice and spot another Dwarf to make the current site an underground site.
Ooooh! This would be killer in a deck with an corruption deck! |
I had to put something here. |
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