I don’t have any particular problem with the article’s theme, since although it’s stuff most people should know, some of them don’t! However, I have a lot of problems with the article itself. It’s too short, too shallow, and needs too much improvement in writing style, it lacks a certain... formality? Not the word I’m quite looking for, but seriously, you’re writing, not speaking directly to another person, so the way you approach things tend sto be slightly different. Even if you use a relaxed writing style, it’s still a writing style. Also, as I said before, there’s SO MUCH you could add in, like for instance, examples! When did lack of self-control cost you a match? What happened exactly? I mean, if it was such a remarkable experience, you should remember it, otherwise, it just seems as you made it up. I would normally rate this article a 1 or 2, but since it won’t affect the results of the Contest in any way, I’ll refrain from voting (and taking away your gp), but leave my word of advice: it’s better to post a well-made, well-thought of article next month, than posting a hasted one this month.

It was OK, but really not spectacular, it was positive though