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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 9:39 am |
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bobtheorc wrote: •  Saruman , Master of the Uruk-hai
Minion • Wizard
Strength 8
Vitality 4
Lurker. Fierce. Damage +1
Skirmish: Exert Saruman to add  .
Skirmish:Remove  to make an  minion gain damage +1 until the end of the turn.
He made them the ultimate machine of war
I would make the first skirmish ability only add . I would also drop fierce, damage +1, and "gain" from the second skirmish ability.  |
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 2:44 pm |
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bobtheorc wrote: Okay new card, btw I will edit the previous cards when i have mroe time
•  Saruman , Master of the Uruk-hai
Minion • Wizard
Strength 8
Vitality 4
Lurker. Fierce. Damage +1
Skirmish: Exert Saruman to add  .
Skirmish:Remove  to make an  minion gain damage +1 until the end of the turn.
He made them the ultimate machine of war
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bobtheorc |
Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 9:15 pm |
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Kinda frenzy of arrows card but not as OP
Storm of Arrows
Event • Archery
When you play this event exert X archers.
Make the minion archer total +2 for each minion exerted this way.
Their arrows and bolts filled the air
and of course we need some archers
Uruk-hai Crossbow Bearer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 7
Vitality 3
Site number 5
Archer. Damage +1
Achery Discard this minion to wound two unbound companions.
Isengar Archer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 9
Vitality 3
Site number 5
Archer. Hunter 2.
Achery While this minion is not exhausted add 2 to the minion archery total.
They fired with a precision unheard of
Isengard Archer Group, Powerful Force
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 14
Vitality 4
Site number 5
Archer. Hunter 2. Damage +1. Fierce.
While you can spot an wizard, each minion gains archer.
Countless foes streamed toward the Hornburg |
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Foresight |
Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 9:40 pm |
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bobtheorc wrote:  Storm of Arrows
Event • Archery
When you play this event exert X  archers.
Make the minion archer total +2 for each minion exerted this way.
Their arrows and bolts filled the air
Drop the "When you play this event" part. I’d make it "Make the minion archery total +1 for...", and put a limit on it. (Limit +2 should be sufficient)
bobtheorc wrote: and of course we need some archers
 Uruk-hai Crossbow Bearer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 7
Vitality 3
Site number 5
Archer. Damage +1
Achery Discard this minion to wound two unbound companions.
Drop the Damage +1. I’d make his archery special ability include a spotting requirement such as: "Spot another minion and discard this minion to wound two unbound companions." Otherwise he’s easily splashed.
bobtheorc wrote:  Isengard Archer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 9
Vitality 3
Site number 5
Archer. Hunter 2.
Achery While this minion is not exhausted add 2 to the minion archery total.
They fired with a precision unheard of
Cool! Drop the Archery special ability bolded bit and make it gametext (Also have it spot an minion for his gametext to kick in). Make him unique.
bobtheorc wrote:  Isengard Archer Group, Powerful Force
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 14
Vitality 4
Site number 5
Archer. Hunter 2. Damage +1. Fierce.
While you can spot an  wizard, each  minion gains archer.
Countless foes streamed toward the Hornburg
Wow! This card will kick your tail if you’re not careful! I’d drop the fierce bit, maybe have the minion gain fierce if you can spot an wizard. Neat cards! |
In his eyes was the look of a hunted beast seeking some gap in the ring of his enemies.  |
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 1:13 pm |
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bobtheorc wrote: Kinda frenzy of arrows card but not as OP
 Storm of Arrows
Event • Archery
When you play this event exert X  archers.
Make the minion archer total +2 for each minion exerted this way.
Their arrows and bolts filled the air
make it make it limit +4(or 3)
 Uruk-hai Crossbow Bearer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 7
Vitality 3
Site number 5
Archer. Damage +1
Achery Discard this minion to wound two unbound companions.
make the free peopls player wound...and drop his vitality to 2.
 Isengar Archer
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 9
Vitality 3
Site number 5
Archer. Hunter 2.
Achery While this minion is not exhausted add 2 to the minion archery total.
They fired with a precision unheard of
cut his vitality to 2 especially with that ability
 Isengard Archer Group, Powerful Force
Minion • Uruk-hai
Strength 14
Vitality 4
Site number 5
Archer. Hunter 2. Damage +1. Fierce.
While you can spot an  wizard, each  minion gains archer.
Countless foes streamed toward the Hornburg
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bobtheorc |
Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 2:02 pm |
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Updates made.
new card until I can make a bunch
• Explosive Device, Deviously Made
Possession • Support Area
To play discard an minion and remove a burden.
Manuever Remove this Possession from the game to remove two unbound companions and all cards they bear from the game.
"They have breached the Deeping Wall!!"
Is this worded correctly? to first 2 reviews as usual. |
Last edited by bobtheorc on Thu May 17, 2007 2:29 pm; edited 1 time in total Ban the Overpowered Orcs
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Anonymous Prodigy |
Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 2:21 pm |
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bobtheorc wrote: •  Explosive Device, Deviously Made
Possession • Support Area
To play discard an  and remove a burden.
Manuever Remove this Possession from the game to remove two unbound companions and all cards they bear from the game.
"They have breached the Deeping Wall!!"
Way too good. This would destroy a Three Hunters deck. Make it discard this possession to discard a possession borne by an unbound companion, and drop the cost to . Plus, what is an ? A minion? A card?  |
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 2:28 pm |
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bobtheorc wrote: •  Explosive Device, Deviously Made
Possession • Support Area
To play discard an  and remove a burden.
Manuever Remove this Possession from the game to remove two unbound companions and all cards they bear from the game.
"They have breached the Deeping Wall!!"
Yeah, you need to specify what type of card you’re discarding (or at least say " card").
I think this would work if it discarded those companions instead, or killed just one of them. Maybe. That’s a delicate balance, and I’m not sure if the cost would match the effect or not. But it’s DEFINATELY overpowered as-is. |
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bobtheorc |
Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 2:30 pm |
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Gp to AP.
What about this?
• Explosive Device, Deviously Made
Possession • Support Area
To play discard an minion and remove a burden.
Manuever Discard this Possession to discard an unbound companion from play.
"They have breached the Deeping Wall!!"
Is this worded correctly?
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DáinIronfoot |
Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 2:32 pm |
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bobtheorc wrote: •  Explosive Device, Deviously Made
Possession • Support Area
To play discard an  minion and remove a burden.
Manuever Discard this Possession to discard an unbound companion from play.
"They have breached the Deeping Wall!!"
•Explosive Device, Deviously Made
Possession • Support Area
To play, discard an minion and remove a burden.
Manuever: Discard this possession to discard an unbound companion.
"They have breached the Deeping Wall!!"
Fully cleaned up now. But yes, I think that works. I think cost would be better, though. |
Best regards, Dáin, Vice Aftokrator of the Chosen Ones
Check out Lasting Alliances, The Road Ahead, and Ages of Middle-earth, three of my five dream card sets that make up Wars of the Ring. Oh, and I have a trade list now!
Also, if you're into DCs or RPGs (or even if you're not!), check out Realms of Middle-earth, the sequel to CG's "DC Adventure", Realms of the North! |
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