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Felipe Musco |
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:18 pm |
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elf lvr wrote: Wyvern Mount
Creature - Wyvern
Flying.
: Wyvern Mount becomes an artifact and equips target creature. Equipped creature is +1/+1 and has flying.
You didn’t have to be a good fighter to be a wyvern rider. You just have to know how to hold on.
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Not entirely sure the wording exists, but then again, nothing like this exists, so it’s fine for me. However, mind you, bonuses are trated with "get(s)", while stactic abilities are treated with gain or has, depending on wether the effect is permanent or not. The "is +1/+1" wording is a lot LotR-ish. Also, PLEASE, for God’s sake, DROP THE TWILIGHT SYMBOLS! They look TERRIBLE!
Lloyd, the White Wolf 4
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
First Strike.
When you play Lloyd, if was spent to play him, it has double strike.
Whenever Lloyd attacks and isn’t blocked, you may have him deal first strike damage to target creature instead of your opponent.
Daein’s general isn’t satisfied with directing from the rear. He strikes like lightning through the enemy’s front lines.
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Remember, even though it’s a legendary creature, and an important character, he’s still being summoned by you, a mighty Planeswalker, to fight for you, so they’re treated as "it".
King’s Spire
Land
King’s Spire comes into play tapped.
: Add to your mana pool.
Legendcycling -
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Too good? I tried to cost it high.
Actually, too impossible. "Legend" is not a type of creature in any way, it’s a supertype that adds to it. Such is, that if it was, in fact, a type, ANY legendary creature in play at the same time as another one would cause’em both to blow up, and that 2 Mistform Ultimus would do the same thing. You could simply change the text a bit to make it: "3[W]Sacrifice King’s Spire: Search your library for a legendary creature, reveal it, and put it in your hand. Shuffle your library afterwards".
Pharaean Battlements
Legendary Land
Pharaean Battlments comes into play tapped.
: Add to your many pool.
: Put a 1/1 Wyvern creature token with flying into play.
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Looks balanced enough.
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elf lvr |
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 8:24 pm |
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Daein Recruit 1
Creature - Goblin
Hasty
Radiance - Sacrifice Daein Recruit: Daein Recruit deals 1 damage to target blocking creature and each creature that shares a color with it.
Sometimes goblins must be sacrificed. Don’t worry. It’s what they’re there for. -Lloyd
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Daein Footsoldier 1
Creature - Human Soldier
While you control a mountin, this creature is +1/+0 and has first strike.
Rough and untrained farmhands and nomads may not be the most skilled fighters, but they fight all the harder when their homeland is at stake.
2/1
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Wyvern’s Roar 2
Instant
Radiance - Tap target creature and each creature that shares a color with it.
The roars of the wyverns sent all but the most hardened veterens fleeing for their lives.
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Felipe Musco |
Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:54 am |
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elf lvr wrote: Alright, Felipe. Point taken. How would YOU word these cards (trying to keep with the original idea) because I’m now totally lost on how to do it.
Now, that’s kinda tricky... Let me try a hand on it:
Flying Wyvern 1
Artifact Creature - Wyvern Equipment
Flying
Equipped creature gets +1/+1 and gains flying (as long as Flying Wyvern is attached to a creature, it’s power and toughness values are ignored).
Equip 2
1/1
Or, if the idea is making a flying mount that, even after it’s rider got knocked out, keeps on fighting, it COULD be something like:
Wild Wyvern 2
Enchantment Creature - Wyvern
Flying
2: Wild Wyvern becomes an aura enchanting target creature. While Wild Wyvern is an aura, enchanted creature gets +2/+2 and has flying. If enchanted creature leaves play, Wild Wyvern becomes a creature.
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Or you could just lose the idea ofit getting back to start beating again, and just letting it die with it’s rider, Eragon-style. |
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Felipe Musco |
Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:06 am |
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elf lvr wrote: Daein Recruit 1
Creature - Goblin
Hast e
Radiance - Sacrifice Daein Recruit: Daein Recruit deals 1 damage to target blocking creature and each creature that shares a color with it.
Sometimes goblins must be sacrificed. Don’t worry. It’s what they’re there for. -Lloyd
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Just reworded it, becuase now damage HAS to have a definite source, so a player can be sure if protection from red applies, etc. It also clears a lot of doubt with the stack, since it makes it CLEAR that a creature CAN deal its damage even AFTER leaving play. Otherwise nice.
Daein Footsoldier 1
Creature - Human Soldier
While you control a mount ain, this creature gets +1/+0 and has first strike.
Rough and untrained farmhands and nomads may not be the most skilled fighters, but they fight all the harder when their homeland is at stake.
2/1
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Very nice! Like a BLade of the Sixth Pride, but slighty better due to the basically cost or dual-ownage!
Wyvern’s Roar 2
Instant
Radiance - Tap target creature and each creature that shares a color with it.
The roars of the wyverns sent all but the most hardened veterens fleeing for their lives.
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Kind of weird for a red ability, I’d keep it at white (not ALL cards have to be multi-colored, you know ) and lower the cost to a MAXIMUM of 2 at common, otherwise, sucks badly. Check Gigadrowse for reference. Sure, it may cost more depending on the number of creatures, but then again, it also taps lands if you want to deny your opponent mana, and since it has replicate,a single counterspell won’t do, they’ll have to counter each copy or use something like Stifle or Trickbind before countering. |
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elf lvr |
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 12:27 am |
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Breeding Pits 2
Put a 1/1 Wyvern creature token with flying into play.
Storm.
The breeding pits echoed with the howls of the newborn.
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Forblaze 2
Instant
As an additional cost to playing Forblaze, tap 3 untapped red creatures you control.
Deal 10 damage to each creature your opponent controls. They can’t be regenerated.
Holy fire fueled by the souls of the wicked.
Zephiel, Rider of Daein 6
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Convoke.
When Zephiel comes into play, you may pay . If you do, put a Wyvern creature from your graveyard into play equipping Zephiel.
Each other Soldier and Wyvern you control is +1/1.
We will not cower in our castles. We have no reason to hide from you. We will fight, and we will win! - Zephiel
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Felipe Musco |
Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:27 am |
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elf lvr wrote: Breeding Pits
Put a 1/1 Wyvern creature token with flying into play.
Storm.
The breeding pits echoed with the howls of the newborn.
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Please man, for God’s sake, lose the twilight symbols... It’s SO weird! And it just looks plain bad next to mana symbols. I don’t see this card as a very good one, since cards like these tend to try and win with larger numbers, and Empty the Warrens gives you twice as many tokens for an easier mana cost. But the idea is still cool, and it might work out in-block.
Forblaze
Instant
As an additional cost to playing Forblaze, tap 3 untapped red creatures you control.
Deal 10 damage to each creature your opponent controls. They can’t be regenerated.
Holy fire fueled by the souls of the wicked.
Read the new Planeswalker, Chandra Nalaar. This sucks too bad compared to her, meaning it’s TREMENDOUSLY overcosted.
Zephiel, Rider of Daein
Legendary Creature - Human Soldier
Convoke.
When Zephiel comes into play, you may pay . If you do, put a Wyvern creature from your graveyard into play equipping Zephiel.
Each other Soldier and Wyvern you control is +1/1.
We will not cower in our castles. We have no reason to hide from you. We will fight, and we will win! - Zephiel
5/5
Cool, although it might also be a tad overcosted, although havin convoke kinda makes up for it.
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:39 pm |
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I’ll make a change on Forblaze, and maybe on Breeding Pits.
I may have to use some of those Lorwyn mechanics in my set! Heck, maybe I’ll try one out right now!
But after this card.
Anglachel, Sword of Holy Fire 4
Legendary Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature is +2/+2. If equipped creature is Zephiel, it has first strike.
Radiance - Sacrifice Anglachel: Anglachel deals 2 damage target creature your opponent controls and each creature that shares a color with it.
Equip - 1
Zephiel forged the blade from a hundred holy souls.
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Daein Veteran
Creature - Human Soldier
When you play Daein Veteran, clash with your opponent. If you win, Daein Veteran comes into play with 2 +1/+1 counters on it.
Veteran soldiers gleaned strength from battles past.
1/1
Kimae, Riftmage 2
Legendary Creature - Human Wizard
When you play Kimae, you may clash with your opponent. If you win, Kimae, Riftmage deals 3 damage to target creature or player.
Whenever a time counter is removed from Kimae, if it is suspended, Scry 1.
Suspend 2 - 2
Once Zephiel arrived in Daein, his first order of business was to bring his followers to join him.
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EDIT: Thanks for explaining, Felipe. |
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Felipe Musco |
Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 8:33 pm |
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Planeswalker are a new card type. There’s no tapping, nor toughness/power, since it’s not a creature, it’s a planeswalker. Each one of those is an activated ability, and you can activate ONE ability per planeswalker, per turn, at sorcery speed. The number below is its loyalty. The planeswalker comes into play with that many loyalty counters, and abilities add or subtract loyalty according to the number. Also, planeswalkers dealt damage lose that many loyalty counters, and once they have 0 loyalty, they’re put in the graveyard. The attacking player declares which creatures are attacking the defending player, and which ones are attacking which planeswlakers he controls, and the defending player may assign blockers normally for both. Also, if any effect let’s you deal damage to an opponent, upon resolving it, you may have the damage dealt to one of his planeswalkers instead. |
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 8:48 pm |
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Whoa... that’s kinda... odd. |
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 9:16 am |
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elf lvr wrote: I’ll make a change on Forblaze, and maybe on Breeding Pits.
I may have to use some of those Lorwyn mechanics in my set! Heck, maybe I’ll try one out right now!
But after this card.
Anglachel, Sword of Holy Fire 4
Legendary Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature is +2/+2. If equipped creature is Zephiel, he has first strike.
Radiance - Sacrifice Anglachel: Deal 2 damage to each creature your opponent controls.
Equip - 1
Zephiel forged the blade from a hundred holy souls.
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Sheesh! First strike on Zaphiel? Ouch. I like it.
Daein Veteran
Creature - Human Soldier
When you play Daein Veteran, you may clash with your opponent. If you win, Daein Veteran comes into play with 2 +1/+1 counters on it.
Veteran soldiers gleaned strength from battles past.
1/1
Clash....eh? How does that work? Complete newbie.
Kimae, Riftmage 2
Legendary Creature - Human Wizard
When you play Kimae, you may clash with your opponent. If you win, deal 3 damage to target creature or player.
Whenever a time counter is removed from Kimae when it is removed from the game, Scry 1.
Suspend 2 - 2
Once Zephiel arrived in Daein, his first order of business was to bring his followers to join him.
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Nice.
EDIT: Thanks for explaining, Felipe. |
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