I understand what you try to do with your shadow, but I think you don't need to ad threats with mordor orcs, you do enough with gollum, captured and
Fat one wants it. If you want to play filmblock-shadow I think following is interesting:
3x
Gollum, Stinker1x
Gollum dark as darkness4x
They Stole It2x
Promise keeping4x
Captured by the ring2x
Fat one wants it2x
Isengard Smith 4x Isengard Warior
2x
Saruman, Servant of the Eye4x
Orc Commander2x
Desert LordYou add threats with :
Captured by the ring,
Fat one wants itYou add burdens for if the rb get assigned and take on the ring to prevents wounds with
they stole it with Gollum (he will take burdens instead which will make your gollum stronger and if he wins then you add a burden, so you can also corrupt your opponent's rb.
Dessert Lord is allways nice to give some wounds and it's a strong minion. So a possible 3 wounds, 2 exertions for almost sure (He might skip the archeryphase somehow).
They stole it give wounds. If rb is a hobbit even 2 wounds. And when rb wants to prevent this then you'll add burdens. It also cycle your hand faster. your deck might be a little to thin for this.
With promisekeeping you'll also exert when gollum gives a wound (also threatwounds)
but why the Isengard minions?! Well actually you will do serious damage in the regroup phase. Concider you have done wounds on the rb; If he has 3 wounds on the rb then you are able to use the warior's abillety (this one also protects your gollum in the archery pahse). If you also have a commander in action then you will add another 3 wounds. If opponent's comps are exhausted then you'll kill comps. With Saruman you make sure that you'll assign one of the orcs so you'll able to use their abillities. With the smits you make sure you can ditch some possesions.
As said the deck might be a little to thin for this, because you'll cycle very fast. So concider to extend with some cards: one or 2 x
Ulaire Enquea, Lieutenant of Morgul would be very nice. And I would concider 1x
You're a Liar and a Thief. adn maybe an
Evil smelling fens.
Just imagine follwing combo with allready
They stole it,
fat one wants it and
promise keeping on table:
play gollum with captured (2 threats),
Saruman, Servant of the Eye,
Orc Commander and Isengard Warior. And
You're a Liar and a Thief in hand. Total cost is 15 twilight. So If you need twilight then you can us
Gollum, dad if there are some burdens to get some extra twillight.
Make sure you'll kill a comp. exert the rb with the threatwounds. Use
You're a Liar and a Thief to add another wound as response on some comp and exert the rb again. He will now have 3 wounds on the rb. Use warios in the regroup (make sure you assign him to a weak comp with saruman). And if there is still enough vitality use the commander in the regroup.
Well just an idea I actually like....
regards, jw