Not sure why you have shadowfax and glamdring, I'd go with a different shadowfax. For burden removal, I'd add 1x a light in his mind. Otherwise looks pretty solid, healing would help though... maybe a copy or two of Terrible and evil?
I have
Shadowfax and
Glamdring, because I have
Radagast, and he can go with the horse, and Gandalf with the sword. I really like the free cycling ability of Gandalf, so I want him to skirmish each turn if possible, and
Foe Hammer is decent burden removal. However
GotM just seemed too good not to play, so I added a
Radagast and his staff. One
ALihM would definitely be awesome if I could find a slot for it, especially if I can use Erland to lose initiative 2-3 times a turn, maybe I"ll drop one
Foe Hammer for it.
Terrible and Evil seems pretty solid too, but I'm pretty sure that I can't squeeze it in.
I'm still brainstorming on a version with some pipeweeds and
One-Upsmanship (I have to get my hands on some
Momentous Gathering first

), but I want to play too many cards in that version.
@Elessar's Socks: can I use
Birthday Present on two
Unheeded (they have the same card title)? I was pretty sure that I can't, but I saw some post here in TLHH, that says that I can (is my English that bad? lol)... (btw
Daddy Twofoot is infinitely better in my playgroup, since nobody plays follower hate

)
I don't really like the bouncing hobbit tech here, because they slow down my shadow side, especially that I play corsairs with
Under Foot, so I want to have as much shadow cards as I can have in the shadow phase. I considered adding 3
Eowyn, LoI, (+
Brego, +
Dernhelm's Blade) but I just can't find deck slots for them.
EDIT: lol, I just checked the notes for
Birthday Present in the database, I lived in the dark for too long

.