Yup! Why is
Deagol in? You can't use it if smeagol is your only companion:
Game Text: To play, spot Smeagol. Aid - Add a burden.
Skirmish: If bearer is not assigned to a skirmish, discard this from play to play an artifact or possession from your draw deck on bearer.
I would like to see another fishingboat an 2 more
Gladden Homestead; Also another
Nasty. So for 30/30 you'll need to take out 3 cards. In my opinion you should take out:
Something Slimy x2
Time for Food Though I like the idea with solo-smeagol I'm not sure if I would play this deck, because I would like to play or mb or standard. A combination of them weakens in my opinion the fs.
I Like your intend to do a lot of cool tricks (I like trick's) but I think the shadow is to unballanced, because of it. I don't understand '
look at him' in this deck: You don't need a lot of twillight with just Gollum and Shelob. We're the cards that helps Gollum to win it's skirmish? That's the best way to add burdens instead of the cool trick's, because the cool trick's are nice but hard to get done. If you don't want your opponent to walk through then for example a combo of
promise keeping &
they stole it on table is much more scary then
Master Broke His Promise. And you need more card's that makes sure you can play gollum. Just 2 x
captured by the ring is unsficient. You really need 4 of them. Love the intention of your deck, but you need to pollish the diamant.