@ES- I wanted to build this deck using cards I already have, so I can't quite make the changes you suggest. Most importantly, I don't have any more copies of Footman or
Small Hope, so I have to include other methods in order to get burdens.
I'll try to put
Discovered in, but the main problem with this deck is just how combo- oriented it is. I had thought about
Ships of Great Draught, but it doesn't seem entirely efficient. If I add
War Towers like Cw0rk says, it would make things easier, but it still wouldn't help that much.
I'll keep playtesting to see what I can do.