Thanks for sharing your video! good stuff! what kind and brand of guitar do you play?
And thank you for the very constructive criticism, its always appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed the lyrics, that is where the bulk of my energies go when it comes to songwriting.
as for the percussion, i know i should really start recording with a metronome, i just haven't gotten the practice yet, to feel comfortable with it. i also messed up a few times while drumming and shaking. but i figured the main point was to get an idea of what it would sound like, not to make it perfect. the whole thing took me only 3 hours to record, mix and upload.
as for the vocals, I honestly have a hard time knowing is i'm on key, or even singing the tune. i'm working on it, and i'll experiment with your advice and try playing it up a few steps. i really like the tone of it where its at, it sounds nice and cheerful while retaining some of the deeper notes and without being too plinky. but i will certainly try to hone in on what i can do to make my vocals sound better
I really appreciate the feedback, and i'm working on another sketch which is a lot more upbeat, and a lot of fun. still rough with the percussion and vocals, but when i finally record everything and mix it, i'll post it.
thanks again, it was really helpful!
-mm